Moments gone by....


The lines on my face
The wrinkles near my eyes
Speak of my age
As time flies.
Of moments, of phase
Like stars in the night
Of time, of days
An era gone by. 
 
Of moments happy and gay
Of dark and the light
Of clouds of grey
And evening sighs!!!
Shadows in the evening play
On a brink of a twilight
Waiting for murmers to say
What a wonderlife life!!!
Pic taken by Meghna Garg (c), Ahmedabad
 
 

37 comments:

  1. The lines on my face
    The wrinkles near my eyes
    Speak of my age
    As time flies...

    superb lines, welcome, and have fun.

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  2. what a lovely poem m- great chosen words..

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  3. lovely ,sweet words -opening up like a garden in spring! Nice positive ending too.

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  4. hey i know how this goes cos it describes me ...well put p.s I have a wonderful life .thank you

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  5. What a wonderful life!!!
    Indeed
    and What a wonderful poem

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  6. So positive! Made feel a bit nostalgic... Life is full of wonderful moments, we just sometimes take them for granted... :)

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  7. Beautiful poem expressing all of life and showing gratitude for all encountered. Lovely words that speak beyond age. Happy Spring.

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  8. Superb, one of the best I've read so far...!

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  9. i love it! this is very nicely done! an exquisite entry! nice choice of words and excellent rhyming. and i love the subject too. time does fly indeed so let us all be happy and smile while we still have teeth.

    please check mine too: Beyond Silent Wars

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  10. I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
    :)

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/

    Luna

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  11. I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
    :)

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/poetry-month-clambake-lets-have-some-fun/

    Luna

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  12. share your work with potluck today.
    appreciate your kindness.

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  13. Thanks to all of you for posting such wonderful, beautiful and encouraging comments... had been a bit busy, so was not able to reply earlier...thanks a lot guys!!!!

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  14. Nostalgia at work...life is indeed a beautiful travelogue in this earth!

    Beautiful poem here!

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  15. Lovely poem. Thanks for joining in Potluck and sharing.

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  16. Thanks Verbality and JamieDedes!!!

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  17. Hey its good. It was really nice to see you around.

    Cheers!

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  18. Beautiful...so vunerable. I love this.

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  19. Beautiful and insightful words. I totally can relate!

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  20. very beautiful ... loved your blog too

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  21. Beautiful poem...expressing the passing moments of life so well. :)

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  22. wow! you give some amazing imagery here! beautiful! :)

    Rally Week 41 - My Poetry

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  23. Thanks all!!!! your comments are very encouraging.....:-)

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  24. Very vibrant, and positive lines! :)

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  25. Hey nice poem on moments that describe different shades of our past :)

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  26. Thanks Psychebubbles and Monu Awalla :-)

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  27. Inspiring and positive - lovely poem:)

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  28. nice lines, very kind and subtle choice of words. Keep up the good work

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  29. Thanks Sanjeev, Bee and Ibro2g :-)

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