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| Take Me Home....please! |
I don't like it here
In a box
No open spaces,
No woolen ball,
Makes it hard to bear
No friendly faces,
No one at all.
I don't like it here
In a box
No shoe laces to pull
No one to pamper me
There's so much of lull
There's lack of glee
I don't like it here
In a box.
I have been here, All my life,
Not too much of a memory,
Not much of an open sky,
Dont feel no happiness
However, much I try
I don't like it here
In a box.
There's no friends here,
No one to play,
No mices here,
During my entire stay.
I don't like it here
In a box.
I want to play too,
On the green grass,
Under the sun,
With wool tangled in my paws,
Escape the dreary
conundrum,
Of my life in a box!
perfect reflection of the chained existence, killing the dreams. like it!!
ReplyDelete@Beyond...yeah...:-) thanks..
ReplyDeleteI agree with @beyond...I like this lines a lot:
ReplyDelete"I have been here, All my life,
Not too much of a memory,
Not much of an open sky,
Dont feel no happiness
However, much I try"
@saru... thanks for dropping by :-)
ReplyDeletetrapped in a box... we all feel like that sometimes... great piece!
ReplyDeletecute and it is powerful when you write from its perspective.
ReplyDeletepowerful expression,
ReplyDeletelovely kitten.
love the title,
ReplyDeleteamazing poem..