The lines on my face
The wrinkles near my eyes
Speak of my age
As time flies.
Of moments, of phase
Like stars in the night
Of time, of days
An era gone by.
Of moments happy and gay
Of dark and the light
Of clouds of grey
And evening sighs!!!
Shadows in the evening play
On a brink of a twilight
Waiting for murmers to say
What a wonderlife life!!!
Pic taken by Meghna Garg (c), Ahmedabad
Beautiful lines you got thr!
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
ReplyDeleteThe lines on my face
ReplyDeleteThe wrinkles near my eyes
Speak of my age
As time flies...
superb lines, welcome, and have fun.
what a lovely poem m- great chosen words..
ReplyDeletelovely ,sweet words -opening up like a garden in spring! Nice positive ending too.
ReplyDeletehey i know how this goes cos it describes me ...well put p.s I have a wonderful life .thank you
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful life!!!
ReplyDeleteIndeed
and What a wonderful poem
So positive! Made feel a bit nostalgic... Life is full of wonderful moments, we just sometimes take them for granted... :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem expressing all of life and showing gratitude for all encountered. Lovely words that speak beyond age. Happy Spring.
ReplyDeleteSuperb, one of the best I've read so far...!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poem!!!
ReplyDeletei love it! this is very nicely done! an exquisite entry! nice choice of words and excellent rhyming. and i love the subject too. time does fly indeed so let us all be happy and smile while we still have teeth.
ReplyDeleteplease check mine too: Beyond Silent Wars
Lovely poem. :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful work here
ReplyDeleteI went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
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I went ahead and posted results for week one a few hours early.
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Luna
share your work with potluck today.
ReplyDeleteappreciate your kindness.
Thanks to all of you for posting such wonderful, beautiful and encouraging comments... had been a bit busy, so was not able to reply earlier...thanks a lot guys!!!!
ReplyDeleteNostalgia at work...life is indeed a beautiful travelogue in this earth!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem here!
Thanks Amity :-)
ReplyDeletebeautiful work.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Thanks for joining in Potluck and sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Verbality and JamieDedes!!!
ReplyDeleteHey its good. It was really nice to see you around.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Beautiful...so vunerable. I love this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and insightful words. I totally can relate!
ReplyDeletevery beautiful ... loved your blog too
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem...expressing the passing moments of life so well. :)
ReplyDeletewow! you give some amazing imagery here! beautiful! :)
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Thanks all!!!! your comments are very encouraging.....:-)
ReplyDeleteVery vibrant, and positive lines! :)
ReplyDeleteHey nice poem on moments that describe different shades of our past :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Psychebubbles and Monu Awalla :-)
ReplyDeleteInspiring and positive - lovely poem:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
ReplyDeletenice lines, very kind and subtle choice of words. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanjeev, Bee and Ibro2g :-)
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